In the book the Long Run

 

In the book the long Run by Matt Long is about this guy who got into a bad accident and wanted to get back on his feet. His accident had to do something with his heart . He started to work out and that’s how he got back on his feet. He kept on fighting back when people said he couldn’t and he on trying.

I like how he didn’t try to nothing people told he what not to do .He put his mind to it and he did . I think he had this saying in his mind if I want it I can get it . He kept on saying that and when he reach what he wanted he said yes I did it .

To me that’s a good thing because the book is like telling you know you can win and someone said that you get them next time. Matt Long knew he could and he wouldn’t stop until he got what he really wanted. That’s
How you now that’s what he wanted and he deserved it. He didn’t want to quit.

Observing

 
I live Boro park, me and my friends like to play football and the ball keeps going in the same gate. The people who owns the gate keeps on complaining that the ball keep on going to the gate. The gate is plastic. so when we throw the ball the ball in a different direction by accident the football would go into the gate.
The problem is were ever we play football on the block we continue to get yelled at for playing ball. I think that is so unfair because we are kid and we like to play ball. so I think someway to fix this is by trying to play football and not to get the ball in peoples gates, but sometimes we don’t control the ball . Another way I think is to play in the street, but when we start to play on the street a minute later cars start coming down the block like nothing . So I think we should deal with it but the people who lives in the gate should relax because there is nothing the can do to make us stop playing.

What i like on my friends blog

   I  like how in Santis blog, Santi compares and describes good details in book. He also has good descritped words that can really says a lot about the book. I like how he compares the book , to the way he is in school. So he can compare a lot bout the book and how he cn relate to the book.
  In Narweens blog, i like how she  shows the action words in the blog. it contains a lot of words that make the blog a lot interresting. I think the more action words you put on the blog. the blog would be more intersting. so to me i think i would put more verbs in the blog to be more interesting