Saturday, April 14, 2012

3 blog post due april 16

     Ever since this guy was born he was always into lions.  His is from Brittan.  His name is Alexander Lacey .He is the person who trainees the lion and tigers.That is his job to train the lions and its hard to do.
 Alex Lacey is a lion trainer. His family has 11 generations of lion train. At the age of 2 he was in a lion club.At the age of 17 he did the his first performance. Now at 36 he is the lion trainer at Ringling Bros. and Barnum & Bailey Circus.
   Alexander Lacey is a lion trainer. He helps theRingling Bros. and Barnum & Bailey Circus . He wakes them up at 6;30 am to start off the morning.  They feed  him water at first. Then 16 pounds of meat everyday.Then he train es them all at different times.
   In  this article it seems cool to be a lion trainer. That  is cool because it a lion and you train them. It seems that to be a lion  needs a lot of work. So with out a lion trainer would be really bad. So it would be good for him and to be a lion trainer.

News." Time For Kids. Web. 14 Apr. 2012. <http://www.timeforkids.com/news/his-life%E2%80%99s-circus/35871>.

Tuesday, April 10, 2012

2 blog due aprill 16

The student did wrong was when he said a quate he is surpose to put a semi cummon and quatation marks on the beginning and the end of the quate.

The author saids ; " There is the night sky filled with swirling clouds, stars ablaze with their own luminescence, and a bright crescent moon. Although the features are exaggerated, this is a scene we can all relate to, and also one that most individuals feel comfortable and at ease with. This sky keeps the viewer's eyes moving about the painting, following the curves and creating a visual dot to dot with the stars. This movement keeps the onlooker involved in the painting while the other factors take hold. Below the rolling hills of the horizon lies a small town. There is a peaceful essence flowing from the structures. Perhaps the cool dark colors and the fiery windows spark memories of our own warm childhood years filled with imagination of what exists in the night and dark starry skies. The center point of the town is the tall steeple of the church, reigning largely over the smaller buildings. This steeple casts down a sense of stability onto the town, and also creates a sense of size and seclusion." This shows what the picture has and what the author thinks. He thinks of what the picture has to have and to show.
  Three ways you can avoide plagiarizing is to use the quate in a different way. To ask someoe for help for a way to rewrite the quate, and to put quations marks on the beginning and end of the quate.

1st blog due april 16

    In Joyce blog she has a realy good arugment of who she likes better. She really has a good arugment. So she llikes more Peeta. She realy had to think back to the movie and the book. So to me, Joyce had a really audayish blog and to really think aht can happen. 
  In Anthony blog he talkes about a plan. The plan he talkes about is how many times does a brown afircan american can go to the school, and get a RIGHT education.  He also saides that it took them three times to get a RIGHT edu. He said it took three times to get the plan right. I do agree and it to many time or somethig bad could of really happen.
  I can inprove in my blogs are to put a good argeement like Joyce did. I havent do that and i would really like to improve on that.  I can  also inprove on writing more about the plot of the story . I can also say what i think about what happe in the story.