The student did wrong was when he said a quate he is surpose to put a semi cummon and quatation marks on the beginning and the end of the quate.
The author saids ; " There is the night sky filled with swirling clouds, stars ablaze with their own luminescence, and a bright crescent moon. Although the features are exaggerated, this is a scene we can all relate to, and also one that most individuals feel comfortable and at ease with. This sky keeps the viewer's eyes moving about the painting, following the curves and creating a visual dot to dot with the stars. This movement keeps the onlooker involved in the painting while the other factors take hold. Below the rolling hills of the horizon lies a small town. There is a peaceful essence flowing from the structures. Perhaps the cool dark colors and the fiery windows spark memories of our own warm childhood years filled with imagination of what exists in the night and dark starry skies. The center point of the town is the tall steeple of the church, reigning largely over the smaller buildings. This steeple casts down a sense of stability onto the town, and also creates a sense of size and seclusion." This shows what the picture has and what the author thinks. He thinks of what the picture has to have and to show.
Three ways you can avoide plagiarizing is to use the quate in a different way. To ask someoe for help for a way to rewrite the quate, and to put quations marks on the beginning and end of the quate.
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